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White_Wizard
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PostajNaslov: Lirike mojih pjesama   Lirike mojih pjesama Icon_minitimeuto lis 03, 2006 11:59 pm

Jednog dana san se rastuzija zbog neke vijesti... nije bitno koje... i ovo je bija moj izljev tuge i depresije....


The Song....

On the way to salvation,
Everyone will lay their eyes on you,
The feeling is not right,
She is no longer in my Sight,
Oh Cruel Destiny,
Is it realy Necessary.?
For me to be special,
For me to loose all the Games
For me to be alone....

Yesterday the Life was fine,
Now the things have crossed the Line,
Everything I Loved has died,
Her Presence here is not Alive.

Forevermore I Shall Lose,
This is My Salvation,
My Ticket to Heaven.
This is the way I choose.
To live, not to die
Is the path where you Cry.

Yesterday the Life was fine,
Now the things have crossed the Line,
Everything I Loved has died,
Her Presence here is not Alive.

I Swim in my own tears,
My Tears are the Ocean...

Yesterday the Life was fine,
Now the things have crossed the Line,
Everything I Loved has died,
Her Presence here is not Alive.
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PostajNaslov: Re: Lirike mojih pjesama   Lirike mojih pjesama Icon_minitimesri lis 04, 2006 5:22 pm

Ovo sam bija nabrzinu procita na blogu ali sad sam bas pokusava razumit (sorry Smile ) i odlicno je Very Happy
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PostajNaslov: Re: Lirike mojih pjesama   Lirike mojih pjesama Icon_minitimepet lis 06, 2006 8:46 am

lijepo ^^
zao mi je, nisam rjecita. krivim jutro Smile
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PostajNaslov: Re: Lirike mojih pjesama   Lirike mojih pjesama Icon_minitimepet lip 22, 2007 10:41 pm

virujem da ti nitko neće prigovarat na to, al moje osobno mišljenje jest da je prilično prejednostavno izraženo, kao da nisi uopće pokušao svoje osjećaje dočarat... ako radiš pismu o tome što mislim da radiš, onda pokušaj više nju fokusirat na opis svojeg unutrašnjeg svijeta, a ne samog događaja... događaji nisu bitni, nego ljudi koji ih doživljavaju... daj malo svoga... unesi sebe sasvim unutra... ako je ovo sve što uspijevaš, onda mislim da nemaš dovoljno
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